Should have submitted to NG first
Probably would have won your competition if you'd have posted it here first and asked NG community to vote for you... I'm sure a bunch would've. Oh well.
Ridiculous... in all the right ways :P
lot and lots of wrongs make a right? good to know! :D
While the animation was done very well, the story was lacking. I had been looking forward to seeing this for a few months after seeing the trailer. The trailer made it seem SO EPIC! It indicated a very different kind of genre and plot. This was just goofy.
It was good for what it was, but the trailer led me to believe that it would be something much better and MUCH different.
Art good, no story
I think that your artistry is very good, and I think that if you created a story (even one short enough to fit into a few seconds- or even just a joke) it would be enough to draw people in and you'd get way better than just daily 5th place.
Haha thanks. Daily 5th was really cool and exciting though. (First award woot! :D)
But the thing is though...I never really meant for it to have a story. Its merely a remake of my first project, and it was never supposed to be more than a ninja and samurai fighting.
Ill write up something and edit my description ok?
Just for you :P
This was too close to rape. That's not something I really think is funny.
I also blammed it...
but I, too, wished to score a 5...
Happy that you are starting to make money with it, though...
YOU DESERVE IT!
I thought it was funny that
just after I got done reviewing your movie, there was a banner right above the results for voting on your flash.
Good school proj
I disagree w/ the person that said the music should have kept playing when you go to each section. I think normally they may have been correct, but not under your circumstances. I assume that this was done with a presentation, probably in a power-point type presentation style, and you wouldn't want a bunch of music covering up your talk while you are trying to explain, so I actually LIKED that the music stopped when you went into each section.
It's Ben Fold's... look it up
To anyone creating a flash: This is an example of how your story/dialogue can make a flash awesome- even when the animation isn't "clean and nice."
Neato! Good job!
P.S. I think the animation style added to the feel of the movie... in a good way.
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